Thursday of Surprice, Thursday of Lies

On the chapters that I have read the beta team is integrated by 4 members: Mallory, a girl who control climate, Titan, an steel boy, Julie, a girl who can transform his form into hard diamond and Alex the telepathic. All of them had a special superpower training each day and a tutor who taught them history. On Thursday the beta team could go to a shopping mall to spend some time. There Alex run into one of the enemy from the junior rangers who was called Kirbie. She tried to fight him but Alex told her that he wanted to betray Cloak, but this was a lie. After Kirbie was foolish she told Alex that she will be patrolling Victory Park on night so that they could see again.

"So on Saturdays afternoons, Alex and his team mates were left on their own devices in the city for a few hours while the adults took care of business.”(Kraatz 92)

What I first did when I read this quote was make a connection because this is the only day the beta team was on city and it was a special day and for me Fridays are does days. Then I also realize that they were villains and they could be recognize easily. And what I also wandered was what could this teenagers do on a shopping?

“Because I’m thinking of leaving the Cloak Society”, Alex lied. He didn’t realize what a perfect excuse this was until after the words had left his mouth.”(Kraatz 103)

Will Kirbie believe in this lie? Maybe she can think that Alex is saying the truth but what if she realize that Alex’s answer was a lie. If I will be in real trouble like Alex was I will probably lie a little bit even though my lie will not be as perfect as Alex. 

This story is being very descriptively in the characters and settings. I think that Alex will try to find Kirbie to get some Rangers information. I think that the author could improve the story by adding more dialog because there is too much explaining compared to dialogue. I am so desperate to see the continue of this book and what will next Alex´s training will be.